Walking The Set

Invent it, see it,
adapt to it…We begin shooting this coming week with two shoot days in L.A, so I flew back home this evening. The filmmaking community is usually responsibile for every first class seat on the Vancouver-LA runs, so it’s always interesting to see who I’ll wind up sitting next to.
This evening, it happened to be an extremely successful writer-producer-director. We started talking about screenwriting, directing and our work methods, and he mentioned something that dovetailed beautifully with an experience I had just two days before.
On that two days before, I walked the set we’ll be using for our second week of shooting. Walking the set is a wonderful thing. As screenwriters, we invent a reality, but our reality is made hyperreality by the convenience of our own minds. Just as in dreams, people move fluidly through our imaginations, spaces conform and rearrange in edits and glimmers, and dimensions change according to our creative whim.
Sooner or later, though, someone is going to have to draw up blueprints that very much constrain the spaces we’ve imagined. For those of you brave enough to have read my little essay on Nietzsche, you’ll recognize this blueprinting as part of the Apollonian requirement of art.
In other words, Dionysius gets you the green light but Apollo hammers some wood together so you have a place to shoot.
When a screenwriter has a chance to walk the set, all sorts of wonderful things start to click into place. Finally, you’re in the real world and out of your head. You invented the reality, now you’re seeing the reality…and what follows is the need to adapt to the reality. Walking around in the space gives you all sorts of ideas, and also sends you scurrying back to the laptop to trim unnecessary dialogue or imagine extra stage direction. You are forced to work to camera angles. You are required to eliminate pointless motion through space. You are asked to connect two people who may or may not be near each other or in view.
It’s fantastic. Once you walk the set, you can finally begin to tell the story best.
So…back to my flight buddy.
He’s a writer and a director, and as a director, he goes on location scouts. Once he finds a location that he really likes, he asks to just sit there at the location while he writes.
Pretty smart. His suggestion to me (and one I now rapidly hand off to you) is to try, whenever possible, to write in places. If you’re doing a scene in a mall, take your laptop to the mall and use your actual presence in the space to direct your storytelling. If you’re doing a scene in a bedroom, trudge into the bedroom. If you’re doing a scene between two people on a date, plotz down on a bench on the 3rd Street Promenade and write as you take in the social buzz.
We can’t get sounds, smells and sights on to a piece of paper, but it’s our job to get as close as possible. If you don’t have a set to walk…go find one.

Or you could use your imagination. Just saying.
Good advice. Welcome back to the States, no matter how brief the stay. :)
I once heard Michael Mann say he likes to write in Cantor’s. I don’t think he writes much about pastrami but rather likes the fact that they never throw you out. It’s obviously not about the hot waitresses. But then, who could work at Hooter’s with all those, er, chicken wings bouncing around the place.
I keep telling Paramount to send us to St. Petersburg, but instead they set a meeting with Peter Berg. Studios…
I’m currently writing a story where a former priest now serial killer is doing all sorts of bad things to a young innocent girl. In a church, no less.
Don’t ask.
This idea of using the acting ‘method’ for writing could be more than just sitting in the location. I also like to collect images and music that are associated with the piece I’m writing about.
In one week, you explain how you can work without any pants on, AND fly first class, and some people wonder why anyone would want to be screenwriters. ;-)
I’m having a hard time following your advice. I went to write in a likely location, but I got in trouble for following your previous post’s advice: to take off my pants.
Well, I’m sure I’ll get this whole “writing” thing down someday. Who knew it was so complex?
Kevin Smith?
That´s all good and well…but like everyone who reads this blog I simply want to know who the writer/director was.
yeah man! who was it?
I’d like to write where my scenes are set, but NASA won’t let me into low earth orbit :(
Joking aside, writing where a scene takes place is probably something every writer should try at least once, although I’d still assume it’s no substitute for the dread specter of hard work. ;)
I longhand (no laptop…) some scenes on location, but do more reading and editing in the field. Which often leads to cutting that hidden fat floating up from the depths and replacing it with just the right spice for the stew. Seeing is believing, especially with make believe. With all the time we spend in front of these screens, I agree with the advice to walk the set as often as possible.
This reminds me of the great Milton Nascimento… He claims to write all his compositions in the noisiest places he can find… to capture the spirit of the place of course… and well, he hasn’t failed!
I have gone to locations to take notes, but I have never actually written on location. I will have to give it a try and see what happens. Thanks for the suggestion!
In response to Tim Clague, I also use music and clippings from magazines when I’m getting into a new project.
But yes, writing “on location” helps a lot. And when I can’t, I turn off the lights and imagine I’m there with my laptop.